Thursday, September 18, 2008

Lead Examples

Pick one of your leads you wrote for your story and post it.

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

Me and my dad were looking out the window until we realized we took off.

#24

Anonymous said...

“Good job Dylan”you did a amazing job on my truck. Since you did a great job on my car you should start doing moms car.




#5

Anonymous said...

I am going to use a sentence with the quotation.13=)

Anonymous said...

“Oh no !” Cristy half smiled stroking my brothers head smoothly. This has got to be the worst weeding in the world !


12

Anonymous said...

Coors field 2 miles away the sign said, but who wanted to walk that far?

# 8 rules =P

Anonymous said...

When we walked past trees we saw more secretive stuff than we wanted to see.




1

Anonymous said...

"Do you want to go to grandma's new house?"15

Anonymous said...

"I can fly. I know that you are thinking it is impossible but i really can. The difference, there is a giant fan under me." This so far is the best lead I have gotten from my story.


-21 :)

Anonymous said...

It was my first time riding the Tower of Doom, my friend Daniel was with me. and thats one of my leads.

#20

Anonymous said...

The lead that I am going to pick is from the book Spirit I picked that one because I what'd to draw the reader in.

Sydni 18

Anonymous said...

Touchdown! My dad screamed as I leaped into the air.

17

Anonymous said...

As I woke up I looked out the window. There was snow. So I got in my gear ,and went outside.9

Anonymous said...

One of my leads is, I can smell the ham roasting, only a couple more presents to go then I can eat.These last few presents are probably not that good anyways I think to myself while reaching for one of the poorly wrapped presents


4

Anonymous said...

Yes I get to go birding today.Hurry up I'm
ready!

Anonymous said...

Stretched out across a rock my brother stated, "lets go in that cave over there." With a fast glance at the cave I yawned and blurted out, "no thanks."




#2

Anonymous said...

“What's that smell?” I questioned as I woke up involuntarily."it smells like smoke."


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Anonymous said...

“Are we going to leave now?”I asked my mom before we left to go to Boulder. While we were almost ready to hit the bumpy road to boulder.
That is what i am going to wright 13= )

Anonymous said...

Jayme looked
through the smoke from the fire and saw the the shimmering water and little specks hopping on the beach.
:) 14

Anonymous said...

My name is Sydni and last summer my mom told me '' lets go'' ''were are we going'' ''just get in''and I came back with a hamster.

Sydni 18

Anonymous said...

as i watch my mom and her assistant yell i hear him say"i quit"! then walkes out of the killer whale training center. i just knew there was not going to be a show tonight.
#23